She fought it hard, this slow death. Every photosynthetic cell that relinquished its green became the Enemy – each sag, each ache, each decaying limb strangled her dreams with dry rot, made hope a withered thing. . The colour came later, much later, apologetic at first, drops of iodine swirling in a glass. One…

virginia creeper evening

 

She fought it hard, this slow death.

Every photosynthetic

cell that relinquished its green

became the Enemy – each

sag, each ache, each decaying

limb strangled her dreams with dry

rot, made hope a withered thing.

.

The colour came later, much

later, apologetic

at first, drops of iodine

swirling in a glass. One day

she woke up amber;

one more dying struggle, one

further convulsive release

and scarlet draped her shoulders.

.

Now one with the world’s sunsets,

her fight is no longer with

the pain that has painted her

so robust a shade. No, she

lives, dying, more alive than

ever before, breathing air

tinged gold, dreaming newer dreams,

intensely saturated

with expectant undertones.

Responses to “Chromaticity”

  1. Caddo

    Wow-wonderful, full and rich, great use of colour, Mel. God bless you BIG–love, sis Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      I’ll take it! 😉 Thanks, friend.

  2. Gallivanta

    I wonder if the leaves do hold on, reluctant to let go? They each fall in their own time which is interesting, which must make each leaf as unique as we humans are…….mmmmm……..lovely words to set my brain a-thinking.

    1. melodylowes

      Quite the thinker you’ve got. I think nature holds within herself our counterparts, so that as we watch her, we can learn about ourselves…

      1. Gallivanta

        Our counterparts…..I like that. Are they wiser than us perhaps?

      2. melodylowes

        Often they seem to be – but they are usually operating by instinct. WE have to make the hard choices – Yikes! 🙂

      3. Gallivanta

        Sigh! That we do.

  3. RoSy

    Fighting the fight until she no longer can…
    Kinda’ like real life. We want to keep living & hang on to our loved ones here. But – sometimes – it’s best to let go.

    1. melodylowes

      All in it’s season, right? What a fine balance, this holding on, and letting go. You come at it from a different perspective – and know first-hand how hard it is to let go. The miracle is, that as we let go, do the hard thing, some of our best colours begin to show. Amazing…

  4. Robert Alan Rife

    Love it.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Rob!

      1. Robert Alan Rife

        ; ^ )

  5. tiny lessons blog

    Very lovely and can be so true!

    1. melodylowes

      Life has a way of shaking us through the tough roads, to see if we will crawl or fly. I for one would like to fly!

      1. tiny lessons blog

        Me too!

  6. lscotthoughts

    “She lives, dying, more alive than ever before” speaks profoundly to me, Melody. Another gem!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Lauren!

  7. gimpet

    This is one of my new favorites. Brilliant Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      Who doesn’t like being told they’re brilliant? (Will you pass the message on to my teenagers for me??) hehe

      1. gimpet

        I will if you reciprocate! And justly earned, I was wide eyed through the entire piece!

      2. melodylowes

        Wow. How amazing is that? I humbly thank you….

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