Exhale

  Her head hangs by a thread eyes scanning dirt as if to seek the soul hidden under a crust of regret The burden of proof on burdened shoulders grips her gaze with enough gravity to tie her eyes to earth but oh! humble heart, you cannot outweigh grace you cannot sink beneath it or…

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Her head hangs

by a thread

eyes scanning dirt

as if to seek the soul

hidden under a crust

of regret

The burden of proof

on burdened shoulders

grips her gaze

with enough gravity

to tie her eyes to earth

but oh! humble heart,

you cannot outweigh

grace

you cannot sink

beneath it

or plod past it

or hang low enough

to mar its magnificence

So look up

set your eyes

beyond this sin-stained soil

to the air beyond

your reach

for it is here

that grace

exhales

 

Responses to “Exhale”

  1. Peter Wiebe

    A beautiful portrayal of grace. What a breath of fresh air God’s grace is to weary sinners!

    1. melodylowes

      Preach it brother! 🙂

  2. Lyle Krahn

    Grace is a wonderful gift.

    1. melodylowes

      Indeed! Priceless!

  3. Caddo

    Grace as “breath” is a wonderful image–thank you! God bless you BIG! love, sis Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      It’s rather a Caddoism I think… thanks!

      1. Caddo

        Oh I like that! Caddoisms…

  4. Pam

    so beautiful, Melody

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Pam!

  5. I HAVE A VOICE

    Wonderful analogy on grace and heavenly compassion !

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie!

  6. Debbie

    This was wonderful and encouraging, Melody! Thank you for our lesson on grace!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie! ow are you doing these days??

  7. Heidi Viars

    Marvelous musing, Miss Melody!!!!

  8. Gallivanta

    ‘You cannot outweigh grace” …lovely line. Makes me think of the Ancient Egyptian depiction of the weighing of the heart against a feather. In that scenario a bad/dishonest heart could outweigh the feather. I am imagining that feather as grace and unable to be outweighed no matter what heart was put next to it.

    1. melodylowes

      What a beautiful analogy. Hmmm – another poem?? 😉

      1. Gallivanta

        Any feathers floating by?

      2. melodylowes

        Not that I can see. Will a bag of craft feathers tossed into the air do??? 😉

      3. Gallivanta

        Sounds fine to me!

  9. Kathleen’s Writings

    As always…your words are profound and thought provoking! Job well done!!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks so much, Kathleen!

  10. tiny lessons blog

    This is a wonderful poem, a keeper for times in need!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! We all need a good reminder from time to time, don’t we?

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