The Great Reversal

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Gravity snowed your shoulders cold,

bent your burdened frame,

watched while troubles multiplied,

whispered words of shame;

Ascension climbed on trouble’s back,

chose the way of love –

soared above the blizzard where

forgiveness reigns above.

16 comments on “The Great Reversal

  1. A fitting tribute to Mandela. Was it him you had in mind when you wrote this? Such beautiful words Melody.

    • melodylowes says:

      I actually DID think of him – the ad for his new movie coming up was playing as I wrote. I think it has a lot of other possibilities, too – but that theme of forgiveness was pretty strong. Thanks!

  2. Heidi Viars says:

    WOW, Melody … these are amazing words! Tried to pick my favorite line … but ALL of it awesome~

  3. Caddo says:

    Wow-Wonderful.

  4. Gallivanta says:

    Interesting! I immediately thought of Mandela too ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. We really do reflect nature & vice versa! BEAUTIFUL Melody! Merry Christmas dear~ Debbie

  6. Geraldine says:

    Wishing you a magical Christmas season and all the good things in 2014! ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Such beautiful words, so eloquent and touching. Thank you, dear Melody. Wishing you all the blessings of the Christmas season. Peace and love from Izzy โ™ฅ

  8. Victoria says:

    As always…lovely!

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