Small felt smaller still after being buried alive, wrapped Egyptian style in layers bred of cold desperation. * Much energy was wasted fuming, whining, recounting tales of those whose days were filled with blue skies and toes in sand, Paradise lost; squirming drove Small deeper into her grave, tied icy anchors to hopes that hell…

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Small felt smaller still after

being buried alive, wrapped

Egyptian style in layers

bred of cold desperation.

*

Much energy was wasted

fuming, whining, recounting

tales of those whose days were filled

with blue skies and toes in sand,

Paradise lost; squirming drove

Small deeper into her grave,

tied icy anchors to hopes

that hell had frozen over.

*

Large watched in compassionate

silence. Grieving. Waiting for

Small’s heart to thaw. He sent his

love in diamonds, reflective

prisms in hues carved by age-

old mysteries into shards

of brilliance, setting each stone

with a jeweller’s practised eye,

glowing treasures at her throat.

*

He waits still. Small sags, sulky,

snow-blind. But patience lives where

love glitters; Large wipes her tears

with rainbows, crowns her mornings

with gentle soliloquies

cooed by mourning doves,

harnessing the Chinook winds

to end her hibernation.

Responses to “Winter Waiting”

  1. Geraldine

    what a great shot! 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Geraldine!!

  2. Caddo

    This is chockablock full of beauty and depth, Mel. Got me all weepy, you did.

    1. melodylowes

      Kleenex? I have plenty up my sleeve… 🙂

      1. Caddo

        I keep mine in my breast pocket–‘course that does leave me looking a tad unbalanced…..

      2. melodylowes

        *paroxysm of coughing* Dangerous. That’s what you are.

      3. Caddo

        I know, I’m incorrigible–I sit up nights thinking of things to unhinge you so your daughter will ask if you need assistance, or if it’s just that Crazy Caddo.

      4. melodylowes

        Time well wasted, I assure you.

  3. Skye @ TheSanctuaryofMyHeart

    Beautifully penned, and the photo is so lovely. Thank you, Melody.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Skye! 🙂

  4. Debbie

    This read like a love story . .. A sweeping and tender one! Thanks Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      And really, it IS a love story – one we are all living out every day. Thanks Debbie!

  5. Marie Hunter Atwood

    I missed the analogy at first and had to reread. How clever! Actually when I thought ‘small’ was a woman I was ready to tell ‘Large’ she didn’t deserve him. Glad the story ended with happiness on both sides!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 I left it purposely ambiguous – I thought there were more possible interpretations that way. So whichever way you read it, you can’t be ‘wrong’! I wanted to leave the ending with a hint of hope – so I’m glad you saw that, too. Thanks Marie!

  6. I HAVE A VOICE

    Ambiguity and vagueness breathes intrigue, and a slow unfolding to the weight of glory– that’s my interpretation & impression ~ Un-belied BEAUTY! Faithfully Debbie

    1. melodylowes

      Lovely! Thank you, Debbie!

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