Excruciating, this exfoliation, this blistering in the heat of battle. Defenceless, skin peels, flayed offal, diseased dandruff powdering slumped shoulders. Let it go. Let it fall kissed by gravity, one with the grave. For unless dead skin cells are scrubbed off – loofah of life – regeneration cannot build life, caress fresh complexion with…

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Excruciating, this exfoliation,

this blistering in the heat

of battle.

Defenceless,

skin peels,

flayed offal,

diseased dandruff

powdering slumped

shoulders.

Let it go.

Let it

fall

kissed

by

gravity,

one with

the grave. For

unless dead skin cells

are scrubbed off –

loofah of life –

regeneration

cannot build life,

caress fresh complexion

with rosebuds.

This is but the

paring,

the shucking of

detritus. Your real and true

lie

underneath…

 

Responses to “Underneath”

  1. Glenda Mills

    Melody, your gift of wordsmithing through the ordinary things of life amazes me. Thanks for sharing!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Glenda!

  2. findingmyinnercourage

    Loved this!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you very much!!

  3. Gallivanta

    Ouch-y. Perhaps a balm of Gilead would help 😉

    1. melodylowes

      You said it! I bet that’s good stuff! 🙂

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