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Wings

  His love was a fledgling – awkward in its moulting, a pupation of sorts. His grasp of her essence floundered in the reeds where others moved sure; progress screeched and twittered, juvenile in proportion and quality. But true love has a way of making a man; where finesse was lacking, perseverance found flight –…

young gull

 

His love was a fledgling –

awkward in its moulting,

a pupation of sorts.

His grasp of her essence

floundered in the reeds

where others moved sure;

progress screeched

and twittered, juvenile

in proportion and quality.

But true love has a way

of making a man;

where finesse was lacking,

perseverance found flight –

I still see them soaring, now and then,

where time and age cannot clip their wings.

 

Responses to “Wings”

  1. adaisygarden

    I like both the words and the photo 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks very much!

  2. Debbie

    Oh my goodness, this was beautiful, Melody! Thank you for sharing it with us!!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie! I have been so busy and tired I haven’t had the energy to write much at all lately. Thank you for the encouragement!

  3. mmladyg

    How beautifully you’ve captured the essence–awkward–of what it means to make that transition. Precision writing. Thanks for continuing to share consistently exquisite poetry.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much…

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