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Regimes

The old year clings to its fragile stalk, tenacious, reluctant. In its husk hang dreams and memories, broken resolutions, minutes and hours dried to a crisp. The dawn of the new year shines pale, impotent in its infancy, tiny arms flung to the heavens. Uncertain, each regards the other; one with suspicion and the weight…

seed-husk

The old year clings to its fragile stalk,

tenacious, reluctant.

In its husk hang dreams and memories,

broken resolutions,

minutes and hours dried to a crisp.

The dawn of the new year shines pale,

impotent in its infancy,

tiny arms flung to the heavens.

Uncertain, each regards the other; one

with suspicion and the weight of wisdom,

the other with wonder, innocent of pain or pleasure.

The old bows in silence,

nods,

breaks,

falls to the rights of the year to come.

As it falls,

it scatters seeds

and the sunlight

notes where they land.

 

Responses to “Regimes”

  1. Stephen Nielsen

    Wonderful thoughts! Thanks.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Stephen! Happy New Year!!

  2. Debbie

    Goodnes, Melody . . .this was super touching and powerful too. Thank you!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Deb! A Happy New Year to you!!

  3. chasedbyadreamC

    I like this poem; it feels right. It speaks to what we all know – elegantly. A well-done piece, Melody.

    1. melodylowes

      🙂
      Thank you!

  4. chasedbyadream

    That was indeed powerful because it’s true and we feel the truth of it. Beautifully done, Melody.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

  5. Lyle Krahn

    It’s great to see that your ability to weave words has carried into the new year. Happy snow.

    1. melodylowes

      Hey! I’ve been wondering how you’re doing in your post-posting era. Hope your holidays were wonderful and you’ve had a great start to the new year!

      1. Lyle Krahn

        I got this crazy idea that I could be a cartoonist even though I can’t draw. I’m having great fun with it and channelling my creative instincts. It’s at krahnicles.com

      2. melodylowes

        Awesome!! I’ll be stopping by soon!

  6. Gallivanta

    And that is the order of things….. 🙂 So we can be hopeful that all will be well.

    1. melodylowes

      Indeed!

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