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Stand

You’ve watched them fade, these fragile dreams you sowed when innocence was freshly minted, the shade of spring meadows. Just when they felt full-grown, they yellowed, curled, leaves from an ancient and shabby book. You lost your grip; now they lie scattered at your feet, crisp in their brokenness. You could have died with them –…

dreamy tree

You’ve watched them fade, these fragile dreams you sowed

when innocence was freshly minted, the shade

of spring meadows. Just when they felt full-grown,

they yellowed, curled, leaves from an ancient and

shabby book. You lost your grip;

now they lie scattered at your feet, crisp in their

brokenness. You could have died with them – no one

would have blamed you if you had joined your fallen

comrades in all their ashen stillness. Yet here you

stand, head high, arms outstretched,

hands open, expectant. You are an oak,

sinewy and solid. Storms have toughened your skin,

stiffened more than your upper lip,

rooted you in profound places. And I think,

perhaps,

that if you can stand tall after all you’ve lost,

I could stand, too.

Responses to “Stand”

  1. Debbie

    Wow , Melody! I think I could stand too . . .like a reverse domino effect. 🙂 Thanks for the blessing of your poetry!

    1. melodylowes

      Stand WITH me!! We’ll be a mini forest! 😉 Thanks Deb!

      1. Gallivanta

        I like the idea of being part of a mini-forest.

      2. melodylowes

        Maybe a copse or specimen planting at the very least? 😉

      3. Gallivanta

        Yes, indeed!

  2. Baydreamer

    Beautiful, powerful, and encouraging words, Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you very much. Hope you are enjoying your weekend!

  3. joannerambling

    Oh so lovely and moving

    1. melodylowes

      Why thank you Joanne! 🙂

  4. Stephen Nielsen

    Beautiful poetry as always!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Stephen!

  5. Kae Bucher

    Wonderful:)

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Kae!

      1. Kae Bucher

        🙂

  6. Sulaiman Hafeez

    Love the poem and the wonderful picture 👏

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

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