Fighting the Undertow

I caught a faint reflection of what I thought was me – I leaned too close and fell right in The river fast and deep. The waves’ roar, fierce and hungry, Clutched with cruel claws; Tossed me end to end to tip And throttled with wet jaws. My orientation left me In search of space…

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I caught a faint reflection

of what I thought was me –

I leaned too close and fell right in

The river fast and deep.

The waves’ roar, fierce and hungry,

Clutched with cruel claws;

Tossed me end to end to tip

And throttled with wet jaws.

My orientation left me

In search of space less cold

As wild I struck with hands and feet

To gain a spot to hold.

My nostrils flared, my lungs drank wet,

I thought that I was done –

When whispered in dishevelled ear

 “Stand up, the battle’s won!”

‘Stand up?’ I cried, and swallowed gulps

Of water wild with spray.

And tossing hard upon the waves,

I felt my heart give way.

“Stand up!” the stern rebuke rejoined.

For balance, I sought new;

Fighting hard at current’s toss

As foot struck rock, hope grew.

The water, rushing on its way

Was only to my waist;

Although its fury gnashed and writhed

And furiously raced –

Walk through, I could; with effort true

I made it to the sod,

And choking long, and gasping hard,

I gave my thanks to God.

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“Fear not, for I have redeemed you; I have called you by name; you are mine.  When you pass through the waters, I will be with you; and when you walk through the rivers, they will not sweep over you…” Isaiah 43:1,2 NIV

Responses to “Fighting the Undertow”

  1. My Wyoming Adventure

    Just beautiful!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much! The ego is a bit fragile when starting a new venture like this new journey into poetry – and it is very gratifying indeed to have folks like you enjoy these words… so thanks. 🙂

  2. petroneagu

    That’s absolutely beautiful! How can you be so creative with poetry? I have such deep respect for people able to write poetry…

    Hugs

    1. melodylowes

      I didn’t really know I could write it – maybe all the emotions of my healing are just coming out now. I’m having fun! Thanks as always for your lovely words. Hugs back!

  3. celinechami

    AMAZING! You have an exceptional talent, and I’m so happy you’re giving us the privilege to get a glimpse of it. Posted a link to this on my blog – a MUST read!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! You are a little ray of cyber-sunshine!

  4. butterflyqueenz

    Absolutely beautiful!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you very much! I’m glad you dropped by!

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