Perspective

In macro-vision, these tears overwhelm; They are all I see through salt-dimmed frame. If trouble takes Perspective’s helm, Then, counting heart-aches, giving name To every ghost that bumps this night, The chains of Christmas past will drag Their mark across my hapless plight, And Hopelessness will choke and gag. But if I take a breath,…

In macro-vision, these tears overwhelm;

They are all I see through salt-dimmed frame.

If trouble takes Perspective’s helm,

Then, counting heart-aches, giving name

To every ghost that bumps this night,

The chains of Christmas past will drag

Their mark across my hapless plight,

And Hopelessness will choke and gag.

But if I take a breath, and back

A step along my sorrowed trail;

If I let details fade to black

And place in context my travail,

I find Perspective, elusive sage,

Hiding in reflected tears.

Her cousin Solace comes of age

As surrendered, I let go of fears

And, eyes adjusting to the scene,

Raindrops blend into the whole;

Painted backdrop becomes serene

As Perspective nudges lifted soul.

 

Responses to “Perspective”

  1. Caddo Veil

    Oh this is incredibly good, Melody–I so know the sound of those “Christmas past chains”–the visual of Marley’s ghost flashed, as I read this! God bless you–love, Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you – breaking those chains is a delicious thought!

      1. Caddo Veil

        Amen! Maybe it happens in stages?

      2. melodylowes

        I actually think that makes sense, Caddo. That seems to be how my process goes, anyway. I guess the thing is to celebrate the ‘chunks’ of headway?

      3. Caddo Veil

        You know me–I’ll celebrate anything, almost–so, chunks of progress/headway sounds good to me!!

  2. poetryandmusings

    you have a beautiful way with words!! I enjoy your blog!!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much – I appreciate that!

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