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Mona Lisa’s View

Day by day I send my gaze into this crowded hall; Month by month, you shuffle past my portion of the wall As year by year I linger here, and camouflage my thoughts Behind my famous cryptic smile; connecting all the dots, I see your secret hidden pain, I see your deepest hopes Etched in…

Image courtesy of Searunner

Day by day I send my gaze into this crowded hall;

Month by month, you shuffle past my portion of the wall

As year by year I linger here, and camouflage my thoughts

Behind my famous cryptic smile; connecting all the dots,

I see your secret hidden pain, I see your deepest hopes

Etched in pen upon each face; I read how each soul copes

With ragged edge of ragged life; with joys and sorrows lined

I trace the story of each heart – through centuries combined,

Perfected is my vista which, discerning, I can view.

While you are straining to see me, I’m watching all of you!

Responses to “Mona Lisa’s View”

  1. Caddo Veil

    Now this one is very unique and intriguing, Melody–great job!!! God bless you today (Monday, Monday)–love, Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      It was posted as a duo, one of the Mona Lisa and this one of her view, and it absolutely caught my fancy. Imagine what she’s seen over the years…

  2. Little Brown Tomato

    This poem speaks to me. Beautifully written.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you – it was sure fun to write and think about!

  3. ivonprefontaine

    I nominated you for a Very Inspiring Blog Award and it is at http://ivonprefontaine.wordpress.com/2012/08/06/very-inspiring-blogger-award/

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you, Ivon! I’ll let you know when I post about it… 🙂

  4. searunner

    Reblogged this on searunner and commented:
    Thanks to Melody for writing this excellent poem using one of my photographs!

    1. whitsendmom

      searunner’s blog brought me here. excellent on both counts–photography and poetry

      1. melodylowes

        Thank you – glad you enjoyed it!

  5. godspoetbychoice

    I thought this was such a great twist life as told by art. You have such a unique perspective on life’

    1. melodylowes

      Why thank you! My childhood’s wild imagination is finally paying off! 🙂

  6. RadioSilencer

    I follow SeaRunner’s blog and saw this post….my husband and I were at the Louvre in June and this is pretty much exactly how it looked! So crazy and so crowded and so not how we wanted to see all the art! I never thought to think of how she might be looking back at us!

    1. melodylowes

      It is rather a jolt – I always imagined it as a serene quiet reflective place – amazing that the art doesn’t all revolt and start a rebellion! 🙂

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