grass seeds sunset

I am plain,

a commonplace and crude step-sister

ever watching  Cinderellas

snag a Prince’s gaze;

nothing within or without

to draw eyes or sighs.

But You are on life’s horizon –

Your Light is breathtaking,

and You in me,

I in You,

flips  heart’s switch,

ignites filament.

When Your sun rises

where soul’s search settles,

dawn breaks through open pores,

and I am –


17 comments on “Stunning…

  1. adaisygarden says:

    Wow! This is beautiful. The photo is stunning, also.

  2. ericmvogt says:

    Lovely, just lovely, spiritual and with such depth… Was Emily Dickinson plain? Eleanor Roosevelt? Sacagawea? Amelia Earheart? Melody the Muse and Muser? I say No. Beauty is their reflection in another’s eyes, whether human, spirit or Divinity. Wonderfully written. You are a beautiful poet, a deep thinker and impassioned dreamer. Youu always hit your mark. 🙂 E

  3. Caddo Veil says:

    I’m guessing this is a word all the female readers need today, and some of the men!

  4. Debbie says:

    This is stunning and brought tears. Thank you and God bless you, as you stun us with the beauty of all you are, of all He created you to be!

  5. Robert Rife says:

    A suitable morning prayer methinks.

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