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Stunning…

I am plain, a commonplace and crude step-sister ever watching  Cinderellas snag a Prince’s gaze; nothing within or without to draw eyes or sighs. But You are on life’s horizon – Your Light is breathtaking, and You in me, I in You, flips  heart’s switch, ignites filament. When Your sun rises where soul’s search settles,…

grass seeds sunset

I am plain,

a commonplace and crude step-sister

ever watching  Cinderellas

snag a Prince’s gaze;

nothing within or without

to draw eyes or sighs.

But You are on life’s horizon –

Your Light is breathtaking,

and You in me,

I in You,

flips  heart’s switch,

ignites filament.

When Your sun rises

where soul’s search settles,

dawn breaks through open pores,

and I am –

stunning…

Responses to “Stunning…”

  1. adaisygarden

    Wow! This is beautiful. The photo is stunning, also.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Daisy! 🙂

  2. ericmvogt

    Lovely, just lovely, spiritual and with such depth… Was Emily Dickinson plain? Eleanor Roosevelt? Sacagawea? Amelia Earheart? Melody the Muse and Muser? I say No. Beauty is their reflection in another’s eyes, whether human, spirit or Divinity. Wonderfully written. You are a beautiful poet, a deep thinker and impassioned dreamer. Youu always hit your mark. 🙂 E

    1. melodylowes

      Why, thank you kind Sir! 🙂

  3. Caddo Veil

    I’m guessing this is a word all the female readers need today, and some of the men!

    1. melodylowes

      I so struggle with this! I really REALLY need to get this knowledge from head to heart…

      1. Caddo Veil

        How ’bout if I shout it to you: YOU ARE STUNNING!!!!! (ooh, I think I hurt my own ears)

      2. melodylowes

        I didn’t hear that. Again? 😉

      3. Caddo Veil

        WE ARE STUNNING, WOW-WONDER-WOWZA!!!!

      4. melodylowes

        Okay – caught that one! 🙂

  4. Debbie

    This is stunning and brought tears. Thank you and God bless you, as you stun us with the beauty of all you are, of all He created you to be!

    1. melodylowes

      *sniff* Thank you, sweet angel of encouragement…

  5. Robert Rife

    A suitable morning prayer methinks.

    1. melodylowes

      You should be walking about with Medieval robes or something, with that vernacular… 🙂

      1. Robert Rife

        Forsooth, ’tis the way he speaketh to all those who doth follow in the way of words, mayhem and frivolity.

      2. melodylowes

        ‘Tis truth He speaketh, anon…

  6. Robert Rife

    Verily…

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