She had no idea she had it in her. There was no way to measure colour, texture, quality of light until she had been frozen, burned, eviscerated, undone. Now, on shivering legs, she takes her first tentative steps into a newly forged reality. She will fall, yes. She will fail and hurt and fumble but…

orb

She had no idea she had it in her.

There was no way to measure

colour,

texture,

quality of light

until

she had been frozen,

burned,

eviscerated,

undone.

Now,

on shivering legs,

she takes her first tentative steps

into a newly forged reality.

She will fall, yes.

She will fail

and hurt

and fumble

but

she will be falling on her own terms,

failing and hurting and fumbling

on turf of her own choosing.

The knowledge

draws hues from

secret source within –

an iridescent radiance,

a glow glazed in the suffering place,

a fountain tapping into

the Deep,

and she oozes

hope…

Responses to “She Had No Idea”

  1. Eric

    Lovely poem and whisper’d thoughts… 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Again, thank you Eric. Enjoy your day!

  2. tiny lessons blog

    I love this poem, it talks both loudly and softly at the same time.

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – I love what you are taking away from this piece. I love how you put it!

  3. juditon

    Nice picture, I love the colour, the texture and DoF.

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 thank you very much!

  4. tinamhunt

    Ah….hope.

    1. melodylowes

      Without it, we’re sunk for sure…

  5. blackandwrite

    This poem is really beautiful, I loved it.

  6. Glenda Mills

    Melody, I can so relate to your words…love the “secret source within” in you. Reminds me of verse from Colossians 1: 27…the mystery of Christ within you…our hope of Glory. Thanks for sharing.

    1. melodylowes

      Mmm – hope of glory. So much to look forward to… Thanks Glenda!

  7. Debbie

    I love this . ..and her oozing hope! 🙂 That is a good thing to ooze, if you’re going to! Thank you!

    1. melodylowes

      *giggle* I like your take on the oozing… 🙂

  8. I HAVE A VOICE

    i love your poetry !

    1. melodylowes

      Aw, thanks! I appreciate that so much! 🙂

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