Wholeness remained elusive while he ignored his holes; now that they are invited to meet the sun, what trickles through christens him enlightened.

chewed leaf

Wholeness remained elusive

while he ignored his holes;

now that they are invited to meet the sun,

what trickles through

christens him

enlightened.

Responses to “Enlightened”

  1. Gallivanta

    That makes me feel warm and happy, like when I sit down in a chair that has been warmed by the sun and feel the warmth on my back.

    1. melodylowes

      Ooh, that IS a good feeling. Curling up like a cat in a warm place… thanks!

  2. momentswithmillie

    I am always being “enlightened” by you and your words!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Thanks Millie!

  3. Heidi Viars

    very enlightening 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      heehee

  4. theywhoseek

    Enlightened by the Son . . . your words are !

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you so much! 🙂

  5. I HAVE A VOICE

    love the word play and the christianing of personal decision ~ thank you friend ~ Debbie

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie! 🙂

  6. Debbie

    I just love this! Your poems are taking on a whole new life . .wonderful, Melody!

    1. melodylowes

      I think I am learning to live and breathe again – I’m so glad it shows… 🙂

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