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Spring Stirs in Her Sleep

Spring stirs in her sleep, stretches, tentative tautness, this seeping skin, this catch in the throat too afraid to name hope as predecessor; life labours in a womb swollen with the earth’s heartbeat and fed by soil’s placenta. She croons in her dreams, low mourning dove cries wrenched from a heart full, overflowing its banks; her…

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Spring stirs in her sleep,

stretches,

tentative tautness, this seeping skin,

this catch in the throat

too afraid to name hope

as predecessor;

life labours in a womb

swollen with the earth’s

heartbeat and

fed by soil’s

placenta. She croons in her dreams,

low mourning dove cries wrenched

from a heart full, overflowing

its banks; her sighs are the

wind in the pussy-willows,

her song the cry of geese on

the wing.

Responses to “Spring Stirs in Her Sleep”

  1. Caddo-Jael

    This one’s exquisitely beautiful–I love “croons in her dreams”, and pussy willows are my fave! It is all beautiful imagery, softly flowing, quiet lyricism. Great!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! So now you’re hyphenated? Out of the Caddo closet, then, are we? 🙂

      1. Caddo-Jael

        TOTALLY–you’ll see soon; the “coming events” begin Sunday (warning: don’t read Caddo’s 7-Word Sunday with food in your mouth–I won’t be responsible for choking issues). Thanks for hangin’ in there with/for me!! I need to work on my “blogroll”–which I’m thinkin’ I’ll call “Family and Friends”.

      2. melodylowes

        What a bout beverages? Do you have insurance for those? 😀

      3. Caddo-Jael

        No, it’s too expensive–so I’m just trying to remember to put the warning tags up (Deb says I never alert her in my emails, and she ends up spitting popcorn at the computer screen).

      4. melodylowes

        We could take up a Caddo-collection for screen wipes, perhaps?? Pass them out at opportune moments?

      5. Caddo-Jael

        Screen wipes! What are they? Mine gets dusted about once a month–and it’s so reassuring to discover I’m not really going blind after all… The TV is worse–it’s old, not a flat-screen–so everyone looks like they’re wearing lace shawls, and going grey.

  2. RoSy

    I can almost feel spring trying to break through that!

    1. melodylowes

      She’s just hitting the snooze button – once she wakes up for real, we’re on! 🙂

  3. Robert Rife

    “fed by soil’s placenta”…now that’s what I’m talkin’ about right there!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Inspired by a post on midwifery on facebook… *sheepish grin*

      1. Robert Rife

        Cool. Why not?!

  4. Judy

    Beautiful. If only I could say the same for the sleeping spring that won’t wake up!

    1. melodylowes

      It sure is a late one in many parts of the world this year! Spring is so encouraging that it leaves a bit of a bitter taste to have winter drag on so long. A cosmic lesson on patience???? 🙂

  5. Debbie

    Wow .. what imagery, Melody .. and that photo matches what you wrote so well! Perfecto!

    1. melodylowes

      She is stirring indeed – what a joy to see the bare earth again, after so long…

  6. greenlightlady

    This poem is so beautiful, Melody! Your picture reminds me of jumping on iced puddles as a child… risky when you’re not sure how deep it is. Oh the memories – I have a boot full! 😉

    Blessings ~ Wendy

    1. melodylowes

      I was just showing to my husband and we both had memories of crashing through ice like this as children! Thanks Wendy!

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