Rose-in-Waiting

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Tender child, a rose-in-waiting,

embryonic heart translating

innocence to jaded earth,

poetry before her birth.

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10 comments on “Rose-in-Waiting

  1. russtowne says:

    I especially like this one, Melody.
    Russ

  2. Pam says:

    the green of the plant transferred to the
    “jaded earth” -nicely done!

  3. Caddo-Jael says:

    I must echo Pam’s comment (I actually noticed it–I’m not always so observant). I love the last line so much, the idea that perhaps I was a poet before my birth…. God bless you today, Mel–love, sis Caddo

  4. RoSy says:

    Simply…Lovely!

  5. Debbie says:

    I am loving seeing what you are seeing, and how you are seeing God in it all! 🙂 Thank you!!

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