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Rose-in-Waiting

Tender child, a rose-in-waiting, embryonic heart translating innocence to jaded earth, poetry before her birth.

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Tender child, a rose-in-waiting,

embryonic heart translating

innocence to jaded earth,

poetry before her birth.

Responses to “Rose-in-Waiting”

  1. russtowne

    I especially like this one, Melody.
    Russ

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Russ!

  2. Pam

    the green of the plant transferred to the
    “jaded earth” -nicely done!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Pam!

  3. Caddo-Jael

    I must echo Pam’s comment (I actually noticed it–I’m not always so observant). I love the last line so much, the idea that perhaps I was a poet before my birth…. God bless you today, Mel–love, sis Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      Isn’t that a delicious idea? I want to simmer in that one for a while…

  4. RoSy

    Simply…Lovely!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Rosy…

  5. Debbie

    I am loving seeing what you are seeing, and how you are seeing God in it all! 🙂 Thank you!!

    1. melodylowes

      Ah, I DO see Him everywhere – He is intrinsically woven into all H has made… Thanks, Debbie!

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