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More Check Than Mate

His moves push all her buttons. He is a master at manipulating her tears, making them pawns in a complicated game of more take than give, more check than mate.

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His moves push all her buttons.

He is a master

at manipulating her tears,

making them pawns in a complicated game of

more take than give,

more check than mate.

Responses to “More Check Than Mate”

  1. Robert Rife

    Uh oh. Don’t like the sound of this (although I like the poem!)…

    1. melodylowes

      This one isn’t personal – just explorative. So no ouch here, although in general terms it could explain quite a number of relationships.

      1. Robert Rife

        I’m glad, although the best art always comes from the deepest emotion, both good and bad.

      2. melodylowes

        I so agree. It’s pretty easy for me to write from an ‘ouch’ perspective, no matter what the context. I find that it really helps me to process the truth, get it sunk down deeper where it needs to take root.

      3. Robert Rife

        Yeah, what you said.

  2. tiny lessons blog

    Let the sun come up and dry all the raindrops for the leaf to proudly show its fresh colors!

    1. melodylowes

      Amen to that! 🙂

  3. russtowne

    “Like” (Since WP won’t let me push the “Like” button at your site, I’ll “Like” you in another way!)
    Russ

    1. melodylowes

      I like that way best, anyway! Thanks Russ!

  4. Debbie

    I really loved this, Melody, and how you played with the words. Plus the photo was wonderful!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie! I’m missing your presence already. Hope and pray you are well!

  5. Pam

    Beautifully done, Melody. I love reading your poems – they always deserve multiple read throughs.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Pam!

  6. greenlightlady

    Nice play on words, Melody! It really does look like a board game.

    Blessings ~ Wendy

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Wendy! I was thinking Chinese Checkers at first – but I liked the tile line too well to switch the game…

  7. Caddo-Jael

    Too painfully familiar–I’m glad it’s just “explorative”, Mel. I prefer solitaire…

    1. melodylowes

      Nice connection… I like It!

  8. RoSy

    An evil game.
    Great write out of that pic!

    1. melodylowes

      Someone commented that they prefer Solitaire – that would have made a great additional line…

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