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Testy Toddler

Fruit-ling in a diaper-wrap on sweetly liquid diet Taking toddling baby steps Suspiciously, too quiet Bee-bottle fed and velvet-wrapped In springtime sunshine dappled If you would just consent to nap You’d be less crabby-appled! This is for all the parents out there who lived through the terrible twos…You’d inwardly complain about their noise at times…

Fruit-ling in a diaper-wrap

on sweetly liquid diet

Taking toddling baby steps

Suspiciously, too quiet

Bee-bottle fed and velvet-wrapped

In springtime sunshine dappled

If you would just consent to nap

You’d be less crabby-appled!

This is for all the parents out there who lived through the terrible twos…You’d inwardly complain about their noise at times – but the silence was SO much worse!  🙂   It was a lot of fun to imagine apple blossoms as toddlers.  

Responses to “Testy Toddler”

  1. petroneagu

    Lovely comparison to a baby or a toddler! And yes, they are suspiciously quiet considering the “alter ego” 🙂

    Have a wonderful weekend, my dear Melody.
    Many hugs

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! Hugs to Ellie too for me!

  2. sandy

    Love it!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Sandy!

  3. Madilyn

    Melody, this poem made me smile and I especially loved “you’d be less crabby-appled!”

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Madilyn! That’s my favourite part, too! 🙂

  4. nothingprofound

    Absolutely enchanting, Melody. Wonderful, creative use of language.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you Marty! Have a great weekend!

  5. My Wyoming Adventure

    It does remind me of those years. They seem like just yesterday.

    1. melodylowes

      I’m feeling sentimental after celebrating my son’s 16th birthday. It is good to go back once in a while and remember. I remember thinking that the diaper phase would never end – but looking back, what a blink of an eye it was! thanks for stopping by.

  6. Rum Punch Drunk

    This reminds me of seeing the lovely little children growing up all around you, so sweet and gentle. Then when you look the other way, you have a reminder of how big and troublesome they get. But I guess we still love them. Lovely poem.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks. There is something so profound about ‘mini’ humans and their development – a vexing, beautiful, exasperating, joyous, monumentally exhausting but triumphant time!

  7. kris landt

    i love it, melody, and it’s so true…the joyful noise and calamity of toddlers is preferable to silence.

    1. melodylowes

      They are just doing hat their design calls them to do! What a shame that our society has not always valued the contributions of children as we should…

  8. Jean

    Very nice!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Jean!

  9. timethief

    Well done!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

  10. sprigblossoms

    I agree, Melody, the silence means something is brewing….like ambitious toddler plans. I am living through them, yay 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Enjoy – those days are gone in a flash! Now I look back and think I would like some window smudges and messes rather than teen angst some days! Each stage has its joys and its sorrows, I guess!

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