risk being

burned when you

turn soul to sun.


lay all on

love’s line when

you don’t wear your



skin is exposed

and you don’t use

your lotion…


face life

stripped down,

 and you make me


11 comments on “Hungry

  1. LifeOfBun says:

    That.. color *gasp* O_O nice picture. It inspires me a lot! I might add it to my face-canvas tomorrow 🙂

  2. Petro Neagu says:

    I might seem silly but the end of the poem made me laugh a little. It just sounds funny to me, what?


    • melodylowes says:

      I meant that this plant in its being simply itself, in its openness, in its courage to expose itself to the world, made me ‘hungry’ for that attitude in my own life. Does that make better sense? 🙂

      • Petro Neagu says:

        Of course, I should’ve known it’s something way deeper than just a basic instinct 🙂 I’m hopelessly silly 🙂

      • melodylowes says:

        You should find my poem called ‘Do Blondes Really Have More Fun?” ha ha Maybe you were having a ‘blonde’ moment. Of course, I can’t imagine understanding a menu in another language, let alone poetry. So I will tease you with admiration in my eyes! 🙂

      • Petro Neagu says:

        Oh, I’m having so many of those blonde moments lately 🙂
        And your teasing is always welcome 🙂

      • melodylowes says:

        So – do you really have more fun than I do? 🙂

      • Petro Neagu says:

        The notion of “fun” is different to everyone.
        I do have a lot of fun when I make fun of myself though so I guess I could beat you on that 🙂

  3. nightlake says:

    inspiring..and the photo looks lovely

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