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Hungry

You risk being burned when you turn soul to sun. You lay all on love’s line when you don’t wear your shades. Your skin is exposed and you don’t use your lotion… You face life stripped down,  and you make me hungry…

You

risk being

burned when you

turn soul to sun.

You

lay all on

love’s line when

you don’t wear your

shades.

Your

skin is exposed

and you don’t use

your lotion…

You

face life

stripped down,

 and you make me

hungry…

Responses to “Hungry”

  1. LifeOfBun

    That.. color *gasp* O_O nice picture. It inspires me a lot! I might add it to my face-canvas tomorrow 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Cool! Glad you liked it! 🙂

  2. Petro Neagu

    I might seem silly but the end of the poem made me laugh a little. It just sounds funny to me, what?

    xoxo

    1. melodylowes

      I meant that this plant in its being simply itself, in its openness, in its courage to expose itself to the world, made me ‘hungry’ for that attitude in my own life. Does that make better sense? 🙂

      1. Petro Neagu

        Of course, I should’ve known it’s something way deeper than just a basic instinct 🙂 I’m hopelessly silly 🙂

      2. melodylowes

        You should find my poem called ‘Do Blondes Really Have More Fun?” ha ha Maybe you were having a ‘blonde’ moment. Of course, I can’t imagine understanding a menu in another language, let alone poetry. So I will tease you with admiration in my eyes! 🙂

      3. Petro Neagu

        Oh, I’m having so many of those blonde moments lately 🙂
        And your teasing is always welcome 🙂

      4. melodylowes

        So – do you really have more fun than I do? 🙂

      5. Petro Neagu

        The notion of “fun” is different to everyone.
        I do have a lot of fun when I make fun of myself though so I guess I could beat you on that 🙂

  3. nightlake

    inspiring..and the photo looks lovely

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you very much!

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