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Flavour

You’re tough, I’ll give you that – beneath those delicate petals are ribs of steel, whale-bone corsets to hold soul together as the frosts gather like vultures to the kill. Is this the flavour of determination? I will drink of its bitter-sweet potion, its brackish thickness, if it means that I can grow a backbone,…

You’re tough, I’ll give you that –

beneath those delicate petals are ribs of steel,

whale-bone corsets to hold soul together

as the frosts gather like vultures to the kill.

Is this the flavour of determination?

I will drink of its bitter-sweet potion,

its brackish thickness,

if it means that

I can grow a backbone, too.

Responses to “Flavour”

  1. Glenda Mills

    Lord, give us steel backbones but delicate pearls of love to those around us. Light us up for Jesus sake and let us shine for your glory!

    1. melodylowes

      I couldn’t have said it better myself! 🙂

  2. Alastair

    Another Trio of Trifficness 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – Triffic! I’ll take it! 🙂

      1. Alastair

        😀

  3. Caddo Veil

    Wow, good strong message–and I love the vision of whale bone corsets. God bless you–love, Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      I wonder if anyone has marketed those yet? We could just be on to something, you think? haha

  4. Debbie

    I loved the corset line too! Thanks for our encouragement today and good back bone advice! God bless you!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie! 🙂

  5. Robert Rife

    Yea. I like this one, Melody. I also miss, desperately, “proper” English spellings of words. The pants off, anything goes, redneck English down here is thoroughly depressing.

    1. melodylowes

      We have our share up here, too – and to a teacher, there is much to cringe about. Ha – my Canadian spelling slipped through – I’ve been pretty consistently spelling for my proportionately larger American audience…good to know it is appreciated! 🙂

  6. godspoetbychoice

    I love your xray eyes that peer through skin to reveal the savoury soul beneath well done from one of your redneck fans

    1. melodylowes

      Wow – I have red-neck fans. Who knew… 🙂

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