as through a glass darkly,

eyes seek out Your light.

Veils, be gone –

cataracts seek sun

as surfer seeks sea,

rest and restoration

no matter the weather.


dawn of my heart,

bloom in rainbows

where winter once reigned.

4 comments on “Dim

  1. Debbie says:

    ‘Rise, dawn of my heart’ …I really loved that, Melody, and all of this poem! You birth a renewed hope in me .. .thank you!

  2. Caddo Veil says:

    Oooh, this is pretty–even with the “veils, be gone” (humorous smirk). The last 4 lines are my fave–“rise, dawn of my heart” almost physically lifts me; and where ever “rainbows bloom”–I’m IN!!

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