Diamonds

  As carbon lies in hidden tombs, the weight of the world on its shoulder, its cells align, and, groaning deep, its troubles make it smolder; but as the pressures bearing down create unbearable stresses, from earthen womb bursts forth a gem of diamond-studded tresses. . As your hope lies in hidden tombs, the weight…

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As carbon lies in hidden tombs,

the weight of the world on its shoulder,

its cells align, and, groaning deep,

its troubles make it smolder;

but as the pressures bearing down

create unbearable stresses,

from earthen womb bursts forth a gem

of diamond-studded tresses.

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As your hope lies in hidden tombs,

the weight of the world on its shoulder,

its cells align, begin to weep,

for troubles make it smolder;

but as the pressures bearing down

create unbearable stresses,

from spirit’s womb bursts forth a gem

transformed, by pain’s successes.

 

 

 

 

Responses to “Diamonds”

  1. Judy

    So beautiful and so true. Thank you!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Judy! 🙂

  2. Holly Michael

    You are such a talented artist! Lovely!

    1. melodylowes

      🙂 Thanks Holly! How is your pain level these days?? How are you managing?

      1. Holly Michael

        Pain is not bad at all. I’ve been exercising and walking a lot. Still have nerve damage in my leg and foot-tingly and the leg is weak. But I’m soooo much better. Thanks for asking. :-). How’ve you been?

      2. melodylowes

        Busy winding up at school and getting my garden ready – I have a writer coming to do a feature on it for a gardening magazine. AND we have a grad! Fun times! 😉 Glad to hear your pain is more manageable. Do you need physio? Will the nerves damage be permanent?

      3. Holly Michael

        I go to physio and they’re not sure of the nerve damage is permanent. I have a grad too! Except he left early, in January, on a football scholarship.

      4. melodylowes

        I’m not looking forward to the empty spot he will leave behind him – but happy that he is off to do what he has chosen for himself…. Hopefully your system will be smart enough to regrow some new nerves! 🙂

      5. Holly Michael

        Great news on the garden

      6. melodylowes

        Fun, isn’t it? I’ve been on the warpath lately – there is a new variety of worm mucking about with my plants and creating some ugly holes everywhere – and nothing I do seems to be able to get rid of them. They are sneaky… I hate them! 😦

  3. Caddo-Jael

    Gorgeous photo, Mel–and I love “hope lies in hidden tombs” (so that’s where I packed it!). God bless you today–love, sis Caddo

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Caddo, dear.

  4. Sissym

    Beautiful poem. This image inspires. Diamonds are like droplets that break the falls.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Sissy! Lovely words…

  5. cythereandreams

    Love the symmetry!

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you!

  6. Heidi Viars

    Reminds me of Romans 5:3 -5 … suffering produces endurance, and endurance produces character, and character produces hope, and hope does not put us to shame … Love your reminders 🙂

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Heidi. Love your handle on Biblical quotes…. 🙂

  7. Debbie

    So encouraging, Melody! Thank you bunches!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie!

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