,

Loved

Your words paint time still –  sun forgets to race,  earth pauses mid-stride, moon holds her longest note, vibrato kissing stars. Heart hibernates, pulse slows; in this moment, I am Mona Lisa, caught in secret smile. I am  waterlily, wetting Monet’s daubed brush. I am light and shadow and tone and hue, whispers under covers…

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Your words paint time still –

 sun forgets to race,

 earth pauses mid-stride,

moon holds her longest note,

vibrato kissing stars.

Heart hibernates,

pulse slows;

in this moment,

I am Mona Lisa,

caught in secret smile.

I am  waterlily,

wetting Monet’s daubed brush.

I am

light

and shadow

and tone

and hue,

whispers under covers

and smuggled glances;

I

am

found out,

captured by lens,

immortalized by sonnet.

I

am

Loved.

Responses to “Loved”

  1. timkeen40

    Very moving.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Tim! 🙂

  2. Robert Rife

    You truly come alive in these kind of poems, Melody. Very nice indeed.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Rob! Where a subject touches a deep nerve, it’s hard not to put your heart into it! I appreciate your encouragement…

      1. Robert Rife

        Yup. The best art almost always comes from places too deep to truly articulate and our art, whatever that is, reaches to find that articulation.

      2. melodylowes

        You have such a knack for putting these things into words. Ever considered writing? 😀

      3. Robert Rife

        Ha! Not a bad idea.

      4. melodylowes

        So – I can take credit for the push in that ‘new’ direction? 😀

      5. Robert Rife

        Yes you may. Have a meaningful Lenten journey, if you’re into that sort of thing.

      6. melodylowes

        I haven’t ever done much, and every year I say I should have – it’s been good to remember that it’s that time of year. Maybe this is the year for something new!

      7. Robert Rife

        ; – )

  3. Debbie

    This was sooooo beautiful! I was uplifted . .thank you!

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Debbie! 🙂

  4. I HAVE A VOICE

    magnificent message ! I am always blessed by your integrity ~ Deborah

    1. melodylowes

      Wow. I’m so honored, Deborah! 🙂

  5. Gallivanta

    Gorgeous.

    1. melodylowes

      Thank you! 🙂

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