Grace Rain

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She’s tired,

so tired,

tired of lists and the

obligatory dance of the

well-worn rut, the

choreography of the

damned. So she’s

letting go, letting

it fall, raindrops

baptising tear ducts

in a redemptive soak,

epsom salts of

grace.

 

 

 

 

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17 comments on “Grace Rain

  1. Sahm King says:

    Reblogged this on The Arkside of Thought | Poetry, Politics, Philosophy, Life and commented:
    Event The Ark One needs a good…lachrymation…every now and then. But none of you heard that from me. Check it out, my friends. Grace Rain.

  2. Gallivanta says:

    Epsom Salts of grace! Do you ever use Epsom Salts on your garden? I am told it is very good but i haven’t actually tried it.

  3. Melody, I like the soul soothing ending… grace!

    Blessings ~ Wendy

  4. adaisygarden says:

    Just love this one.

  5. Caddo-Jael says:

    “Choreography of the damned”–wow, Mel, if you never wrote another word, those would seal your place among poet laureates (in my humble and correct opinion). I LOVE that!!!

  6. lylekrahn says:

    That sounds like a great idea and the imagery even more enticing.

  7. Debbie says:

    I LOVE THIS! Thank you, Melody, for writing so faithfully and so full of faith!

  8. Dear melody, hope this finds you well. clocked your poem on a reblog from a pal of mine (and rightly so, great poem). Reading the comments here makes me aware i am not alone in thinking that ‘Choreography of the damned’ is a magnificent line, made me think and re-think and read the poem over and over. Well done, m’lady, excellent piece. Keep smiling and keep writing, kind regards from Baldy πŸ™‚

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