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The Funeral

Her heart is a sinking sun, pooling patches of dried blood on a canvas thickening with yesterday’s paint. Tucked in rich velvet and laid to rest (open to public viewing) she mourns its passing, pressing treasured lines of scrawled script to lips of stone, epitaph carved in lieu of flowers. Rays of light, the glory days…

Saskatchewan Landing sunset

Her heart is a sinking sun,

pooling patches of dried blood

on a canvas thickening

with yesterday’s paint. Tucked in

rich velvet and laid to rest

(open to public viewing)

she mourns its passing, pressing

treasured lines of scrawled script to

lips of stone, epitaph carved in

lieu of flowers. Rays of light,

the glory days of holding

and being held, protrude from

memories slashed through the frayed

places where sky meets casket’s

edge. The sun will rise again

but not today, not until

a thousand tomorrows have

burned to ashes, cremation’s

signature on cloud-sealed urn.

 

Responses to “The Funeral”

  1. lylekrahn

    Powerful words for a powerful photo.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks Lyle!

  2. Gallivanta

    lylekrahn echoes my thoughts exactly.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks, Gallivanta! It was taken from the top of a steep hill after a rigorous ascent – a majestic and awesome view indeed.

      1. Gallivanta

        I am impressed.

  3. Robert Rife

    Melody, this is brilliant. Honestly.

    1. melodylowes

      Wow. Thanks, Rob. I am reading a great little book on poetry and think I ‘get it’ – and can’t wait to be trying new things. I could never understand line breaks – this one has 7 syllables in each line, and I really like that the breaks are actually deliberately done. Lots to learn, yes?

      1. Robert Rife

        Poetry, or word art, is an exacting science with inexact ramifications. A struggle so worth the effort. Keep up the good work.

  4. I HAVE A VOICE

    goodness dear, what a tribute to the Creator of all that’s beautiful !

    1. melodylowes

      Isn’t He something? 😉

  5. RoSy

    Very somber moment in life. I’ve had the feeling come & go. It really never goes though – it just kind of sits & watches from the background.

    1. melodylowes

      Grief is like that – it likes to hang around just beneath the surface and then jump out and bite you in inconvenient places…

  6. bennetta faire

    WOW-wonderful–powerfully sharp imagery.

    1. melodylowes

      Thanks! I’m really enjoying reading my book on poetry – it has helped me to sharpen up my toolkit.

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